Double damage!

Back Off reaction Spell 1

Concentrate Manipulate Mental
Traditions Occult
targets a creatures comes within five feet of you Defense Will save

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Stay away! When a creature comes within five feet of you, you can force the target to make a Will save..

Critical Success The creature is unaffected.
Success The target stops the action that moved it within five feet of you..
Failure The target stops the action that moved it within five feet of you. It then uses another action if able to take a stride action to move away from you. This action can provoke reactive strikes.
Critical Failure The target stops the action that moved it within five feet of you. It then uses another action if able to take a stride action to move away from you and you determine the path the creature takes. This action can provoke reactive strikes.

Thoughts?