The voyage taught you things.
You’ve spent much of your time on board the ships learning the ways of space. You gain the trained proficiency rank in Crafting and Piloting. If you would automatically become trained in one of those skills (from your background or class, for example), you instead become trained in a skill of your choice.
You also gain the Additional Lore general feat for Kasatha Lore.
Shhh…I’m hunting…
Shoot from the shadows. For two actions you load less powder into a firearm and make a ranged attack with that firearm. Reduce all damage die from that firearm by 1 size on a hit, but firing the weapon does not reveal your location or presence to anyone.
Thoughts?
ready… aim…..
Requirements You’re wielding a gun.
You hinder your target with a shot. You Aim and then make a ranged Strike against your mark. If the Strike hits, the target gains Painful 1 (DC 15 flat check to end). If a target has the Painful condition, it does not increase.
Thoughts?
Real deep cuts!
Rogue
Prerequisite: Deep Cut
Right into the joint! When you succeed on an attack on a target with the off-guard condition, you can reduce the sneak attack damage by 1d6 or 2d6 and the target gains Painful 1 or Painful 2 (DC 15 flat check reduce by 1). If a target has the Painful condition, it can increase up to Painful 2.
Thoughts?
Let’s make a few changes….
Rogue
You’ve learned how to really cut into tendons and joints. When you succeed on an attack on a target with the off-guard condition, you can reduce the sneak attack damage by 1d6 and the target gains Painful 1 (DC 15 flat check to end). If a target has the Painful condition, it does not increase.
Thoughts?
Focus on what you love.
Archetype
Prerequisites Ritualist Dedication, master in Arcana, Nature, Occultism, or Religion
You’ve focused on just being better. Increase your circumstance bonus to all checks to perform a ritual by 2, and learn two additional rituals of any level you can cast.
Thoughts?
Right through the tendons!
Rogue Swashbuckler
Prerequisite: Deep Cut
You’ve continued to learn to apply pain to an enemy. Your deep Cut ability now causes Painful 2. If a target has the Painful condition, it does not increase past Painful 2.
Thoughts?
That’s into the joint!
Rogue Swashbuckler
You’ve learned how to really cut into tendons and joints. When you succeed on an attack on a target with the off-guard condition, it is gains Painful 1 (DC 15 flat check to end). If a target has the Painful condition, it does not increase.
Thoughts?
that’s gotta’ sting!
You drive the weapon deeper and cut right into sinew and join. Make a melee Strike against an enemy in range. If you hit the target in addition to normal damage inflect Painful 1 on the target, painful 2 on a critical or increase the target’s painful condition by 1, 2 on a critical hit.
Not the face!
You aim high and nearly blind those you shoot at. When you impose the suppressed condition on a target, the target must make a Fortitude save against your class DC. If the target fails they are blinded while suppressed.
Thoughts?
Throat Punch Games 