ready… aim…..
Requirements You’re wielding a gun.
You hinder your target with a shot. You Aim and then make a ranged Strike against your mark. If the Strike hits, the target gains Painful 1 (DC 15 flat check to end). If a target has the Painful condition, it does not increase.
Thoughts?
Real deep cuts!
Rogue
Prerequisite: Deep Cut
Right into the joint! When you succeed on an attack on a target with the off-guard condition, you can reduce the sneak attack damage by 1d6 or 2d6 and the target gains Painful 1 or Painful 2 (DC 15 flat check reduce by 1). If a target has the Painful condition, it can increase up to Painful 2.
Thoughts?
Let’s make a few changes….
Rogue
You’ve learned how to really cut into tendons and joints. When you succeed on an attack on a target with the off-guard condition, you can reduce the sneak attack damage by 1d6 and the target gains Painful 1 (DC 15 flat check to end). If a target has the Painful condition, it does not increase.
Thoughts?
Focus on what you love.
Archetype
Prerequisites Ritualist Dedication, master in Arcana, Nature, Occultism, or Religion
You’ve focused on just being better. Increase your circumstance bonus to all checks to perform a ritual by 2, and learn two additional rituals of any level you can cast.
Thoughts?
Right through the tendons!
Rogue Swashbuckler
Prerequisite: Deep Cut
You’ve continued to learn to apply pain to an enemy. Your deep Cut ability now causes Painful 2. If a target has the Painful condition, it does not increase past Painful 2.
Thoughts?
That’s into the joint!
Rogue Swashbuckler
You’ve learned how to really cut into tendons and joints. When you succeed on an attack on a target with the off-guard condition, it is gains Painful 1 (DC 15 flat check to end). If a target has the Painful condition, it does not increase.
Thoughts?
that’s gotta’ sting!
You drive the weapon deeper and cut right into sinew and join. Make a melee Strike against an enemy in range. If you hit the target in addition to normal damage inflect Painful 1 on the target, painful 2 on a critical or increase the target’s painful condition by 1, 2 on a critical hit.
Not the face!
You aim high and nearly blind those you shoot at. When you impose the suppressed condition on a target, the target must make a Fortitude save against your class DC. If the target fails they are blinded while suppressed.
Thoughts?
I am speed!
General
Trigger You roll a natural 20 on initiative or are 10 higher than the next closest enemy’s initiative.
You just hit the ground running. Gain the quickened condition for the first round of combat.
Just listen to me, I know something!
General Skill
Prerequisites: expert in Arcana, Lore (any one), Nature, Occultism, or Religion.
You know a thing or two, so obviously you know what is going on. When you are interacting in a manner where the skill you would be involved, you can substitute your knowledge check for a deception. diplomacy, or intimidation check instead.
Thoughts?
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