Ok, how about one more system with this spell?
Disrupt Balance , Level 1 wizard
CT Special R 30 feet D 2 rd./ lvl.
SV constitution negates SR yes Comp V, S
When the caster points at a living creature in range, the subtle balances that maintain it are disrupted. The creature begins to melt from the inside out taking 1d2 +1 HP per level of the caster acid damage. At the start of the creatures turn, it makes another saving throw, if it fails the spell continues and it takes damage again.
Thoughts?
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